From the onset, Jill's professionalism and focus on enhancing the client's experience left a strong impression on me. A deep love for storytelling and creativity was evident throughout the process. The in-line script notes I received were remarkably well-observed, aligning seamlessly with the reader's report. They not only highlighted the strengths of the concept and script, but also astutely pointed out areas that required further attention and work. This collaboration provided a fresh set of eyes on a currently optioned project that had previously undergone development with both above and below the line talent attachments.
In essence, Jill's understanding of storytelling is at an advanced level. She adeptly identified and addressed the right elements to strengthen the script and spark additional ideas, all while respecting my original intent. Blue Pen operates within the storytelling sandbox with genuine enthusiasm, aiming to guide your script toward marketability and producibility. I wouldn't hesitate to recommend Jill to other Producers and Writers and have already done so. I fully intend to continue utilizing Blue Pen for script reading and further embracing Jill's expertise as a Story Engineer.
- Andrew Ord 01/13/2024
